In class today we peer reviewed other students papers. I am not the best with grammar so I am hoping that they do not rely on me to fix all of their mistakes when I make plenty of my own. My topic I think is a topic that not many people know about because it does not affect them. So in my paper I want to tell these people that it does effect them because it affects our country's reputation which reflects its people. I peer reviewed one of the girls in my group and her paper is going to be about cell phones and their physical and mental effect that they have one people. I think that this is a great topic because almost everyone has a cell phone and our culture has become obsessed with technology and without it most of us would be lost.
I think both of these topics are cool. The cell phone topic is something that we all deal with on a daily basis and depending on how she goes about her paper, could be very interesting. Sex slaves is a topic not discussed very often, I think learning more about what really goes on could be interesting also. Oh, and i hope Katie's grammar improves.
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